Most recent comments for Emily on typewriting.org http://typewriting.org/2005/12/04/Emily/ Sun, 04 Dec 2005 19:58:55 -0800 typewriting.org http://typewriting.org/2005/12/04/Emily/#comment-1639 <div>here's a sandwich for you:<br /> 1. the harmonica works well 2. the drum track needs help 3. it does seem long, but better percussion might change that. 4, the lyrics captured my attention and kept me listening <br /> conclusion: give it a rest and come back to it later to fix it up</div> Sun, 04 Dec 2005 19:58:55 -0800 http://typewriting.org/2005/12/04/Emily/#comment-1639